Defocusing an image allows it to start using the language of memory, and of dreams. It creates an impression of a scene, and possibly some recognisable features (a streetlight, a bridge) but the direct context of the place/subject is stripped away. A timeless/placeless feeling becomes to be apparent – the images become unspecific, undirective. They become impressionistic, and shapes, colours and tone become ever more important. Although they still may allude to things, the narrative of the image becomes far more open and doesn’t necessarily go further than a suggestion, a hint towards something.

This is possibly my favorite so far. There could be a slight contradiction between the image and the intent. I want to explore the sense of time and narrative within an image through defamiliarisation. However, this is shot at the market, and although it’s not quite the market most people know, it’s recognisable. I felt it was worth working with despite this, mainly because of the colours and the structures. There’s a carnivalesque feel to the image, but this is combined with a certain sense of threat as this is a place that’s known for its hustle and bustle, but it’s night and the place is deserted except for the single figure. This figure enables the viewer to begin constructing narratives, but its ambiguity leaves the narrative open. The lack of focus and distorted perspective help to present the place in an unfamiliar way, and, interestingly, the part of the image that appears to have the most distorted perspective (the left side of the centre stall) is actually contained in one photograph.

I feel this image is working to a certain degree as well. It feels placeless to me; it could be in a different city, a different country. There is a figure in this image but between the focus and the way the light fell, she’s lost the dark patch on the right. But if on a close inspection someone wonders if that could be a person, could that be enough in itself? Even though the image isn’t supposed to be focused, it doesn’t feel quite right. I’m not sure at this stage if it needs to be slightly sharper, or perhaps even less – this is something I’m going to have to learn through practice.

This image felt like it should work, and may have had potential but on reflection it’s got a long way to go. It’s too busy to work as a defocused image. I tried separating the images and leaving gaps to see if that would improve it. I think the idea of having disconnected, defocused images could work, but it’s really not there yet. This has drawn my attention to the end right image – it’s working quite well on its own, and I think this could be down to its composition. The suggestion of figures in the left two images is quite an interesting feature, and something to bear in mind.

The rest of these images aren’t really working, but there's things I can take from them. It's looking like figures will have to be well lit, I think the images are going to need plenty of space in them and the tonal qualities and colours within a scene are more important than ever;
These are a couple of single images I felt were working on some level;
These images are obviously a bit out of keeping with this new direction, but the images have a vibrant quality to them with it's really nice, and the short depth of field is good practice for the other things I'm doing. Also, in it tutorial it was pointed out to me that these are actually quite reminiscent of the images above, especially the circular shapes of the lego, and the circular shapes of the lights.
Something that came up in tutorial was how I might present my work in the degree show. Displaying the image/images using a projector or a lightbox might work pretty well - it would illuminate the use of light within the images, and possibly give more impact to the unfocused nature of the work. This is obviously something that'll need playing with to see if it's going to work or not.
I'm edging more towards playing with light sources than a projector - if an image is projected, it never wholly exists within the physical world. Although this might be an interesting idea, I definitely want to have a little play with lights.








































